ื‘ืกืดื“

Kavanot: Mirror, Mirror

Thoughts on Tanach and the Davening

We now come to the conclusion of ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื:

ื— ื•ื™ื”ื™ ืžืžื—ืจืช ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืคืฉื˜ ืืช ื”ื—ืœืœื™ื; ื•ื™ืžืฆืื• ืืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ืฉืœืฉืช ื‘ื ื™ื• ื ืคืœื™ื ื‘ื”ืจ ื”ื’ืœื‘ืขืƒ ื˜ ื•ื™ื›ืจืชื• ืืช ืจืืฉื• ื•ื™ืคืฉื˜ื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื•; ื•ื™ืฉืœื—ื• ื‘ืืจืฅ ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืกื‘ื™ื‘ ืœื‘ืฉืจ ื‘ื™ืช ืขืฆื‘ื™ื”ื ื•ืืช ื”ืขืืƒ ื™ ื•ื™ืฉื™ืžื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื• ื‘ื™ืช ืขืฉืชืจื•ืช; ื•ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืชื• ืชืงืขื• ื‘ื—ื•ืžืช ื‘ื™ืช ืฉืŸืƒ ื™ื ื•ื™ืฉืžืขื• ืืœื™ื• ื™ืฉื‘ื™ ื™ื‘ื™ืฉ ื’ืœืขื“ ืืช ืืฉืจ ืขืฉื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืฉืื•ืœืƒ ื™ื‘ ื•ื™ืงื•ืžื• ื›ืœ ืื™ืฉ ื—ื™ืœ ื•ื™ืœื›ื• ื›ืœ ื”ืœื™ืœื” ื•ื™ืงื—ื• ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืช ื‘ื ื™ื• ืžื—ื•ืžืช ื‘ื™ืช ืฉืŸ; ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ื™ื‘ืฉื” ื•ื™ืฉืจืคื• ืืชื ืฉืืƒ ื™ื’ ื•ื™ืงื—ื• ืืช ืขืฆืžืชื™ื”ื ื•ื™ืงื‘ืจื• ืชื—ืช ื”ืืฉืœ ื‘ื™ื‘ืฉื”; ื•ื™ืฆืžื• ืฉื‘ืขืช ื™ืžื™ืืƒ

ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื ืคืจืง ืœื

Before we start analyzing the text (and thereโ€™s a lot to talk about), I want to introduce a new resource: ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื. The historical section of ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื starts with ืคืจืง ื™, and parallels ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื ืคืจืง ืœื and then continues to parallel all of ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื‘ and ืžืœื›ื™ื. Itโ€™s an opportunity we have not had before, to look at the same stories from a different perspective. First, what is ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื? It was composed some 500 years after ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ, with the return to Zion under Ezra:

ืขื–ืจื ื›ืชื‘ ืกืคืจื• ื•ื™ื—ืก ืฉืœ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ืขื“ ืœื•. ืžืกื™ื™ืขื ืœื™ื” ืœืจื‘, ื“ืืžืจ ืจื‘ ื™ื”ื•ื“ื” ืืžืจ ืจื‘: ืœื ืขืœื” ืขื–ืจื ืžื‘ื‘ืœ ืขื“ ืฉื™ื—ืก ืขืฆืžื• ื•ืขืœื”. ื•ืžืืŸ ืืกืงื™ื”? ื ื—ืžื™ื” ื‘ืŸ ื—ื›ืœื™ื”.

ื‘ื‘ื ื‘ืชืจื ื˜ื•, ื

The commentators argue on the meaning of ืขื“ ืœื•. One understanding is ืขื“ ืขืฆืžื•โ€”that ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื is the genealogy of the world from Adam until Ezra himself:

ืขื“ ืœื•: ืขื“ ืฉื™ื™ื—ืก ืขืฆืžื•. ืžืกื™ื™ืข ืœื™ืณ ื›ื•ืณ ืขื“ ืฉื™ื™ื—ืก ืขืฆืžื•: ืฉื›ืชื‘ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ืขื“ ืฉื™ื™ื—ืก ื‘ื• ืืช ืขืฆืžื•.

ืจืฉืดื™, ื‘ื‘ื ื‘ืชืจื ื˜ื•, ื

The problem is that ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื doesnโ€™t mention Ezra at all; the genealogy stops before his generation. Ezraโ€™s ancestry is recorded in the book of Ezra itself. Some try to connect ืขื“ ืœื• to a specific verse:

ืคื™ืจืฉ ืจื‘ื™ื ื• ื—ื ื ืืœ: ืขื“ ืคืกื•ืง (ื“ื”ืดื‘ ื›ื:ื‘) โ€ื•ืœื• ืื—ื™ื ื‘ื ื™ ื™ื”ื•ืฉืคื˜โ€œ, ื•ืžืกื™ื™ืข ืœืจื‘ ืฉื™ื™ื—ืก ืขืฆืžื• ื•ืขืœื”, ืฉื™ื™ื—ื•ืก ืขืฆืžื• ื›ืชื‘ ืœืคื ื™ ื–ื” ื”ืคืกื•ืง. ื•ืงืฉื” ืœืคื™ืจื•ืฉื• ื“ื™ื”ื‘ื™ื” ืœื™ื” ืœืžื™ืžืจ ืขื“ ื•ืœื• ื‘ื•ื™ืดื•.

ืชื•ืกืคื•ืช, ื‘ื‘ื ื‘ืชืจื ื˜ื•, ื, ื“ืดื” ืขื“ ืœื•

I think the most profound understanding of the gemara is that of the Maharshal:

ื ืดืœ ื”ืื™ ืขื“ ืœื• ื“ืงืืžืจ ืื™ื ื• ืžืœืฉื•ืŸ ืขึทื“ ื•ืœืฉื•ืŸ ืœื• ื”ื•ื ืขืฆืžื• ื›ื™ ืื™ืŸ ื–ื” ืœืฉื•ืŸ ื”ืชืœืžื•ื“. ื•ืขื•ื“ ืžื ื™ืŸ ืœื• ืฉืœื ื›ืชื‘ ื›ื•ืœื•? ื•ืื™ืŸ ื–ื” ืืœื ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื ื‘ื™ืื•ืช ื‘ืœื ื˜ืขื. ื’ื ื‘ื›ืœ ื”ืกืคืจ ืฉืœ ื“ืดื” ืœื ื›ืชื‘ ืฉืžื• ืฉืœ ืขื–ืจืโ€ฆื•ืขื•ื“ ื“ืื ื›ืŸ ืœืคื™ ื–ื” ืžืฉืžืข ื“ืกืคืจ ืขื–ืจื ื›ืชื‘ ื›ื•ืœื•, ื•ื–ื”ื• ืžื•ื›ื— ืœื”ื“ื™ื ืžืŸ ื”ืคืกื•ืง ืฉื ื—ืžื™ื” ื‘ืŸ ื—ื›ืœื™ื” ืกื™ื™ืžื•โ€ฆืขืœ ื›ืŸ ื ืจืื” ืœืคืจืฉ ื“ื”ื›ื™ ืงืืžืจ: ื›ืชื‘ ืกืคืจ ืขื–ืจื ื•ื™ื™ื—ื•ืก ืฉืœ ื“ืดื” ืฉื”ื•ื ืขึตื“ ืœื• ื›ืœื•ืžืจ ืขึตื“ื•ึผืช ืœืžื” ืฉื™ื™ื—ืก ืืช ืขืฆืžื• ื›ื‘ืจ ื‘ืกืคืจ ืขื–ืจื. ื•ื–ื”ื• ืื™ื ื• ื‘ืจืื™ื” ื•ื‘ืžื•ืคืช ืžื” ืฉื™ื—ืก ืื“ื ืืช ืขืฆืžื• ืขื“ ืฉื›ืชื‘ ืกืคืจ ื“ืดื” ืฉื™ื—ืก ื”ื›ืœืœ ืžืจืืฉ ื•ืขื“ ืกื•ืฃโ€ฆื•ื–ื”ื• ืขื“ื•ืช ื™ื—ื•ืก ื‘ืžื•ืคืช ืœืžื” ืฉื™ื—ืก ื›ื‘ืจ ืืช ืขืฆืžื•. ื•ืขืœ ื–ื” ืžืกื™ืง ืฉืคื™ืจ ืžืกื™ื™ืข ื›ื•ืณ. ื•ืชืœืžื•ื“ื ื“ืืงืฉื™ ืžืืŸ ืืกืงื™ื” ืขืœ ืกืคืจ ืขื–ืจื ื”ื•ื ื“ืืงืฉื™.

ื—ื›ืžืช ืฉืœืžื” (ืžื”ืจืฉืดืœ), ื‘ื‘ื ื‘ืชืจื ื˜ื•, ื

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื is meant to be an ืขื“ื•ืช, a testimony. Ezra is speaking to a generation trying to rebuild the land of Israel after generations of exile. He is reminding them where they came from, that they have a long history of living in the land, of political independence and of a religion centered on the ื‘ื™ืช ื”ืžืงื“ืฉ. Everything in ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื emphasizes the eternal role of the Davidic dynasty and the ืžืงื“ืฉ; where ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ shows us Davidโ€™s reign, warts and all, ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื shows only the glory.

ื›ื• ื•ื“ื•ื™ื“ ื‘ืŸ ื™ืฉื™ ืžืœืš ืขืœ ื›ืœ ื™ืฉืจืืœืƒ ื›ื– ื•ื”ื™ืžื™ื ืืฉืจ ืžืœืš ืขืœ ื™ืฉืจืืœ ืืจื‘ืขื™ื ืฉื ื”; ื‘ื—ื‘ืจื•ืŸ ืžืœืš ืฉื‘ืข ืฉื ื™ื ื•ื‘ื™ืจื•ืฉืœื ืžืœืš ืฉืœืฉื™ื ื•ืฉืœื•ืฉืƒ ื›ื— ื•ื™ืžืช ื‘ืฉื™ื‘ื” ื˜ื•ื‘ื” ืฉื‘ืข ื™ืžื™ื ืขืฉืจ ื•ื›ื‘ื•ื“; ื•ื™ืžืœืš ืฉืœืžื” ื‘ื ื• ืชื—ืชื™ื•ืƒ

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ื ืคืจืง ื›ื˜

How was ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื written? It is clear that Ezra had older texts available and used them to compose his book:

ื›ื˜ ื•ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื“ื•ื™ื“ ื”ืžืœืš ื”ืจืืฉื ื™ื ื•ื”ืื—ืจื ื™ื ื”ื ื ื›ืชื•ื‘ื™ื ืขืœ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื”ืจืื” ื•ืขืœ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื ืชืŸ ื”ื ื‘ื™ื ื•ืขืœ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื’ื“ ื”ื—ื–ื”ืƒ ืœ ืขื ื›ืœ ืžืœื›ื•ืชื• ื•ื’ื‘ื•ืจืชื•; ื•ื”ืขืชื™ื ืืฉืจ ืขื‘ืจื• ืขืœื™ื• ื•ืขืœ ื™ืฉืจืืœ ื•ืขืœ ื›ืœ ืžืžืœื›ื•ืช ื”ืืจืฆื•ืชืƒ

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ื ืคืจืง ื›ื˜

ื›ื’ ื•ืœื ื ืฉื ื“ื•ื™ื“ ืžืกืคืจื ืœืžื‘ืŸ ืขืฉืจื™ื ืฉื ื” ื•ืœืžื˜ื”; ื›ื™ ืืžืจ ื”ืณ ืœื”ืจื‘ื•ืช ืืช ื™ืฉืจืืœ ื›ื›ื•ื›ื‘ื™ ื”ืฉืžื™ืืƒ ื›ื“ ื™ื•ืื‘ ื‘ืŸ ืฆืจื•ื™ื” ื”ื—ืœ ืœืžื ื•ืช ื•ืœื ื›ืœื” ื•ื™ื”ื™ ื‘ื–ืืช ืงืฆืฃ ืขืœ ื™ืฉืจืืœ; ื•ืœื ืขืœื” ื”ืžืกืคืจ ื‘ืžืกืคืจ ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ืœืžืœืš ื“ื•ื™ื“ืƒ

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ื ืคืจืง ื›ื–

โ€œRashiโ€ (actually itโ€™s pretty clear that the commentary attributed to Rashi in the printed ืžืงืจืื•ืช ื’ื“ื•ืœื•ืช is not Rashi) cites a version of the Yerushalmi that mentions other texts:

ื•ื–ื”ื• ืฉืžืคืจืฉ ื‘ืกื•ืฃ ืžื’ื™ืœืช ื™ืจื•ืฉืœืžื™ ื’ืณ ืกืคืจื™ื ืžืฆื ืขื–ืจื ืกืคืจ ืžืขื•ื ื™ื ืกืคืจ ื–ืื˜ื•ื˜ื™ ืกืคืจ ื”ืื—ื™ื, ื•ื‘ื˜ืœื• ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ืื—ื“ ื•ืงื™ื™ืžื• ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ืฉื ื™ื. ื•ื›ืŸ ืžืฆืื• ื”ืจื‘ื” ืกืคืจื™ ื™ื—ื•ืกื™ืŸ ื›ืฉื ืžืฆื ื’ืณ ืื• ื”ืณ ื‘ื˜ืœื• ื”ืžื•ืขื˜ ื•ืงื™ื™ืžื• ื”ืžืจื•ื‘ื™ื ื•ื›ืฉื ืžืฆืื• ื–ื•ื’ื•ืช ื›ืžื• ื•ื‘ื’ื‘ืขื•ืŸ ื™ืฉื‘ื• ืื‘ื™ ื’ื‘ืขื•ืŸ ื”ื•ืฆืจืš ืœื›ืชื•ื‘ ืฉืชื™ ืคืขืžื™ื ืฉืื™ืŸ ืกื“ืจ ื™ื—ื•ืกืŸ ืฉื•ื”โ€ฆ

ืจืฉืดื™, ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ื—:ื›ื˜, ื“ืดื” ื•ื‘ื’ื‘ืขื•ืŸ ื™ืฉื‘ื• ืื‘ื™ ื’ื‘ืขื•ืŸ

So we look at ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื the way Documentary Theorists look at the Torah: as an accumulation of older texts assembled into a somewhat coherent whole. Inconsistencies and gaps are to be expected. The difference is that while the Documentarists dismiss the โ€œRedactorโ€ as a blind editor, gluing texts together haphazardly. We realize that the redactor is the actual author, like an artist creating a collage. Itโ€™s not the origin of the parts that matter, itโ€™s what the creator has done with the whole.

So we see Ezra writing his book of ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื, with multiple scrolls arrayed in front of him, creating a work to inspire the people of the new Jerusalem.

There is a David who was a king, a warrior, a political unifier; a flesh-and-blood human being with perhaps more than his share of opponents, suffering, and domestic heartache; the major figure in a circumscribed era of Jewish history. This is the David of Samuel. To treat him this way is not to diminish his greatness; it is merely to describe his years on earth without considering his impact on the broad, eternal sweep of Jewish history.

The other David is the David of Chronicles. Ezra depicts Davidโ€™s role as a prime mover in Israelโ€™s destiny, as the one who was instrumental in erecting the Templeโ€”though he is not to hew its stonesโ€”and in fashioning the eventful Messianic dynasty. In the life of this David, his activities to prepare for the Temple are essential, while his ways and personal woes are not. In recounting Davidโ€™s meta-historical role, Ezra stresses what is essential to it while he minimizes what is extraneous. When we proclaim every month, โ€œDavid, the King of Israel, lives and endures,โ€ we mean this Davidโ€ฆ

Rabbi Moshe Eisemann, An Overview: David the King, the Man, Divrei Hayamim I, p. xliv

I was amused to find this comment in a scholarly-oriented Christian Bible commentary:

Wellenhausenโ€ฆwas scathing about the way the Chronicler had transformed the figure of King David from a mighty warrior to one who spent his time arguing about ecclesiastical niceties.

Eerdmans Commentary on the Bible, p.284

Itโ€™s all a matter of framing.


So we have two sources that take different perspectives on the same incidents and history. The problem is that there are many differences, large and small. Which ones warrant further study, and which can we let pass as unimportant? James Kugel coined the term โ€œomnisignificanceโ€ for

The basic assumption underlying all rabbinic exegesis is that the slightest details of the biblical text have a meaning that is both comprehensible and significant. Nothing in the Bible, in other words, ought to be explained as the product of chance, or, for that matter, as an emphatic or rhetorical formโ€ฆEvery detail is put there to teach us something new and importantโ€ฆ

James L. Kugel, The Idea of Biblical Poetry, p. 104

The irony is that it is not only the rabbinic exegetes that impose omnisignificance on the text. The academics like Kugel do the same thing, though not for religious reasons: they have to feed their children. The imperative of โ€œpublish or perishโ€ means that the Biblical scholar has to continously find newer, more subtle interpretations of the same text.

From a religious perspective, we can understand the omnisignificant imperative in the Torah, which is the word of G-d. Every word, every letter, even the crowns decorating the letters, has importance. But ื ื‘ื™ืื™ื, and especially ื›ืชื•ื‘ื™ื, are assumed to have Divinely-inspired but still human authors. I donโ€™t think we have to find a deep meaning in each variation in such a text.

The Malbim, notably, disagreed:

ืœื ื ืžืฆืื• ื‘ืžืœื™ืฆื•ืช ื”ื ื‘ื™ืื™ื ื•ื‘ืžืืžืจื™ื”ื, ื”ืคืฉื•ื˜ื™ื ืื• ื”ื›ืคื•ืœื™ื, ืžืœื•ืช ืื• ืคืขืœื™ื ื”ื•ื ื—ื• ื‘ืžืงืจื” ืžื‘ืœืชื™ ื›ื•ื ื” ืžื™ื•ื—ื“ืช, ืขื“ ืฉื›ืœ ื”ืžืœื•ืช ื•ื”ืฉืžื•ืช ื•ื”ืคืขืœื™ื ืฉืžื”ื ื”ื•ืจื›ื‘ ื›ืœ ืžืืžืจ, ืœื ืœื‘ื“ ืฉื”ื ืžื•ื›ืจื—ื™ื ืœื‘ื ื‘ืžืืžืจ ื”ื”ื•ื, ื›ื™ ื’ื ืœื ื”ื™ื” ืืคืฉืจ ืœื”ืžืœื™ืฅ ื”ืืœืงื™ ืœื”ื ื™ื— ืชื—ืชื™ื” ืžืœื” ืื—ืจืช, ื›ื™ ื›ืœ ืžืœื•ืช ื”ืžืœื™ืฆื” ื”ืืœืงื™ืช ืฉืงื•ืœื” ื‘ืžืื–ื ื™ ื”ื—ื›ืžื” ื•ื”ื“ืขืชโ€ฆ

ืœื ื ืžืฆื ื‘ืžืœื™ืฆื•ืช ื”ื ื‘ื™ืื™ื ืงืœื™ืคื” ื‘ืœื ืชื•ืš, ื’ื•ื™ื” ื‘ืœื ื ืฉืžื”, ืœื‘ื•ืฉ ื‘ืœื ืžืชืœื‘ืฉ, ืžืืžืจ ืจื™ืง ืžืจืขื™ื•ืŸ ื ืฉื’ื‘โ€ฆ

ืžืœื‘ื™ืดื, ื™ืฉืขื™ื”ื•, ื”ืงื“ืžื”

He is arguing with Ibn Ezraโ€™s famous anti-omnisignificant comment:

ืืžืจ ืื‘ืจื”ื ื”ืžื—ื‘ืจ: ืžืฉืคื˜ ืื ืฉื™ ืœืฉื•ืŸ ื”ืงื“ืฉ ืคืขื ื™ื‘ืืจื• ื“ื‘ื•ืจื ื‘ืืจ ื”ื™ื˜ื™ื‘, ื•ืคืขื ื™ืืžืจื• ื”ืฆื•ืจืš ื‘ืžืœื•ืช ืงืฆืจื•ืช, ืฉื™ื•ื›ืœ ื”ืฉื•ืžืข ืœื”ื‘ื™ืŸ ื˜ืขืžื. ื•ื“ืข, ื›ื™ ื”ืžืœื•ืช ื”ื ื›ื’ื•ืคื•ืช, ื•ื”ื˜ืขืžื™ื ื”ื ื›ื ืฉืžื•ืช, ื•ื”ื’ื•ืฃ ืœื ืฉืžื”, ื”ื•ื ื›ืžื• ื›ืœื™, ืขืœ ื›ืŸ ืžืฉืคื˜ ื›ืœ ื”ื—ื›ืžื™ื ื‘ื›ืœ ืœืฉื•ืŸ ืฉื™ืฉืžืจื• ื”ื˜ืขืžื™ื, ื•ืื™ื ื ื—ื•ืฉืฉื™ื ืžืฉื ื•ื™ ื”ืžืœื•ืช, ืื—ืจ ืฉื”ื ืฉื•ื•ืช ื‘ื˜ืขืžืŸ.

ืื‘ืŸ ืขื–ืจื, ืฉืžื•ืช ื›:ื

But if the variations do not have โ€œcomprehensible and significantโ€ meanings, why are they there? If both ืฉืžื•ืืœ and ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื exist contemporaneously, I find it hard to imagine a scenario where so many scribal errorsโ€”typosโ€”accumulate that much in each book. I would assume that they would be โ€œcorrectedโ€ to match each other over the years. If we look at texts that are supposed to be identical, we find much smaller difference. I actually calculated the Levenshtein distance between our texts and compared it to the Masoretic and Qumran Isaiah, along with other intra-Tanach texts.

The difference between Isaiah texts is 3%, as is the difference between ืชื”ื™ืœื™ื ืงื” in ืชื”ื™ืœื™ื and ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื. I would suggest that this is the expected difference from hundreds of years of (in Meir Sternbergโ€™s words) scribal misadventure. The difference between ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื and ืฉืžื•ืืœ is 30%. Thatโ€™s ten times more, much more than I am willing to ascribe to โ€œtyposโ€. But if we are not to assign major significance to each change, what are we to make of it?

My understanding is based on a comment by the cartoonist Rick Kirkman:

โ€ฆI place the board over a copy of the sketch and, on the light box, trace everything a little more deliberately than I drew it the first time. I do try to retain some of the original spontaneity by not adhering too strictly to the sketch.

Rick Kirkman, Baby Blues: Ten Years and Still in Diapers, p. 61

I see Ezra, with his sources in front of him, writing his book while reading from the others but not copying word-for-word, letting his words flow as he sets down the history that he wants to tell.

However, the more I think about it, the more I like a slightly different explanation. Itโ€™s not so much that ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื is looser, it is that ืฉืžื•ืืœ is looser. ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ is a book of ื ื‘ื•ืื”, and we expect a more poetic text. We discussed this on the pasuk (ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื ื™ื’:ื)โ€Ž ื‘ืŸ ืฉื ื” ืฉืื•ืœ ื‘ืžืœื›ื•. Similarly, ืชื”ื™ืœื™ื ื™ื— is 21% different from the corresponding chapter in ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ. It is less a copy than a cover version, composed with the ื ื‘ื™ื's own style.

ืื™ืŸ ืฉื ื™ ื ื‘ื™ืื™ื ืžืชื ื‘ืื™ืŸ ื‘ืกื™ื’ื ื•ืŸ ืื—ื“

ืกื ื”ื“ืจื™ืŸ ืคื˜,ื

ื ื•ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ื ืœื—ืžื™ื ื‘ื™ืฉืจืืœ;
ื•ื™ื ืกื• ืื ืฉื™ ื™ืฉืจืืœ ืžืคื ื™ ืคืœืฉืชื™ื
ื•ื™ืคืœื• ื—ืœืœื™ื ื‘ื”ืจ ื”ื’ืœื‘ืขืƒ
ื‘ ื•ื™ื“ื‘ืงื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ื‘ื ื™ื•;
ื•ื™ื›ื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืืช ื™ื”ื•ื ืชืŸ
ื•ืืช ืื‘ื™ื ื“ื‘ ื•ืืช ืžืœื›ื™ืฉื•ืข ื‘ื ื™ ืฉืื•ืœืƒ
ื’ ื•ืชื›ื‘ื“ ื”ืžืœื—ืžื” ืืœ ืฉืื•ืœ
ื•ื™ืžืฆืื”ื• ื”ืžื•ืจื™ื ืื ืฉื™ื ื‘ืงืฉืช;
ื•ื™ื—ืœ ืžืื“ ืžื”ืžื•ืจื™ืืƒ
ื“ ื•ื™ืืžืจ ืฉืื•ืœ ืœื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื•
ืฉืœืฃ ื—ืจื‘ืš ื•ื“ืงืจื ื™ ื‘ื”
ืคืŸ ื™ื‘ื•ืื• ื”ืขืจืœื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื•ื“ืงืจื ื™ ื•ื”ืชืขืœืœื• ื‘ื™
ื•ืœื ืื‘ื” ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื›ื™ ื™ืจื ืžืื“;
ื•ื™ืงื— ืฉืื•ืœ ืืช ื”ื—ืจื‘ ื•ื™ืคืœ ืขืœื™ื”ืƒ
ื” ื•ื™ืจื ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื›ื™ ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ;
ื•ื™ืคืœ ื’ื ื”ื•ื ืขืœ ื—ืจื‘ื• ื•ื™ืžืช ืขืžื•ืƒ
ื• ื•ื™ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืฉืœืฉืช ื‘ื ื™ื•
ื•ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื’ื ื›ืœ ืื ืฉื™ื• ื‘ื™ื•ื ื”ื”ื•ื ื™ื—ื“ื•ืƒ
ื– ื•ื™ืจืื• ืื ืฉื™ ื™ืฉืจืืœ
ืืฉืจ ื‘ืขื‘ืจ ื”ืขืžืง ื•ืืฉืจ ื‘ืขื‘ืจ ื”ื™ืจื“ืŸ
ื›ื™ ื ืกื• ืื ืฉื™ ื™ืฉืจืืœ ื•ื›ื™ ืžืชื• ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ื‘ื ื™ื•;
ื•ื™ืขื–ื‘ื• ืืช ื”ืขืจื™ื ื•ื™ื ืกื•
ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ื•ื™ืฉื‘ื• ื‘ื”ืŸืƒ

ื— ื•ื™ื”ื™ ืžืžื—ืจืช
ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืคืฉื˜ ืืช ื”ื—ืœืœื™ื;
ื•ื™ืžืฆืื• ืืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ืฉืœืฉืช ื‘ื ื™ื•
ื ืคืœื™ื ื‘ื”ืจ ื”ื’ืœื‘ืขืƒ
ื˜ ื•ื™ื›ืจืชื• ืืช ืจืืฉื• ื•ื™ืคืฉื˜ื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื•;
ื•ื™ืฉืœื—ื• ื‘ืืจืฅ ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืกื‘ื™ื‘
ืœื‘ืฉืจ ื‘ื™ืช ืขืฆื‘ื™ื”ื ื•ืืช ื”ืขืืƒ
ื™ ื•ื™ืฉื™ืžื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื• ื‘ื™ืช ืขืฉืชืจื•ืช;
ื•ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืชื• ืชืงืขื• ื‘ื—ื•ืžืช ื‘ื™ืช ืฉืŸืƒ
ื™ื ื•ื™ืฉืžืขื• ืืœื™ื• ื™ืฉื‘ื™ ื™ื‘ื™ืฉ ื’ืœืขื“
ืืช ืืฉืจ ืขืฉื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืฉืื•ืœืƒ
ื™ื‘ ื•ื™ืงื•ืžื• ื›ืœ ืื™ืฉ ื—ื™ืœ ื•ื™ืœื›ื• ื›ืœ ื”ืœื™ืœื”
ื•ื™ืงื—ื• ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืช ื‘ื ื™ื• ืžื—ื•ืžืช ื‘ื™ืช ืฉืŸ;
ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ื™ื‘ืฉื”
ื•ื™ืฉืจืคื• ืืชื ืฉืืƒ
ื™ื’ ื•ื™ืงื—ื• ืืช ืขืฆืžืชื™ื”ื ื•ื™ืงื‘ืจื• ืชื—ืช ื”ืืฉืœ ื‘ื™ื‘ืฉื”;
ื•ื™ืฆืžื• ืฉื‘ืขืช ื™ืžื™ืืƒ

ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื ืคืจืง ืœื

ื ื•ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ื ืœื—ืžื• ื‘ื™ืฉืจืืœ;
ื•ื™ื ืก ืื™ืฉ ื™ืฉืจืืœ ืžืคื ื™ ืคืœืฉืชื™ื
ื•ื™ืคืœื• ื—ืœืœื™ื ื‘ื”ืจ ื’ืœื‘ืขืƒ
ื‘ ื•ื™ื“ื‘ืงื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืื—ืจื™ ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืื—ืจื™ ื‘ื ื™ื•;
ื•ื™ื›ื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืืช ื™ื•ื ืชืŸ
ื•ืืช ืื‘ื™ื ื“ื‘ ื•ืืช ืžืœื›ื™ืฉื•ืข ื‘ื ื™ ืฉืื•ืœืƒ
ื’ ื•ืชื›ื‘ื“ ื”ืžืœื—ืžื” ืขืœ ืฉืื•ืœ
ื•ื™ืžืฆืื”ื• ื”ืžื•ืจื™ื ื‘ืงืฉืช;
ื•ื™ื—ืœ ืžืŸ ื”ื™ื•ืจื™ืืƒ
ื“ ื•ื™ืืžืจ ืฉืื•ืœ ืืœ ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื•
ืฉืœืฃ ื—ืจื‘ืš ื•ื“ืงืจื ื™ ื‘ื”
ืคืŸ ื™ื‘ืื• ื”ืขืจืœื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื•ื”ืชืขืœืœื• ื‘ื™
ื•ืœื ืื‘ื” ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื›ื™ ื™ืจื ืžืื“;
ื•ื™ืงื— ืฉืื•ืœ ืืช ื”ื—ืจื‘ ื•ื™ืคืœ ืขืœื™ื”ืƒ
ื” ื•ื™ืจื ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื›ื™ ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ;
ื•ื™ืคืœ ื’ื ื”ื•ื ืขืœ ื”ื—ืจื‘ ื•ื™ืžืชืƒ
ื• ื•ื™ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืฉืœืฉืช ื‘ื ื™ื•
ื•ื›ืœ ื‘ื™ืชื• ื™ื—ื“ื• ืžืชื•ืƒ
ื– ื•ื™ืจืื• ื›ืœ ืื™ืฉ ื™ืฉืจืืœ
ืืฉืจ ื‘ืขืžืง
ื›ื™ ื ืกื• ื•ื›ื™ ืžืชื• ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ื‘ื ื™ื•;
ื•ื™ืขื–ื‘ื• ืขืจื™ื”ื ื•ื™ื ืกื•
ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ื•ื™ืฉื‘ื• ื‘ื”ืืƒ

ื— ื•ื™ื”ื™ ืžืžื—ืจืช
ื•ื™ื‘ืื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืคืฉื˜ ืืช ื”ื—ืœืœื™ื;
ื•ื™ืžืฆืื• ืืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ื‘ื ื™ื•
ื ืคืœื™ื ื‘ื”ืจ ื’ืœื‘ืขืƒ
ื˜ ื•ื™ืคืฉื™ื˜ื”ื• ื•ื™ืฉืื• ืืช ืจืืฉื• ื•ืืช ื›ืœื™ื•;
ื•ื™ืฉืœื—ื• ื‘ืืจืฅ ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืกื‘ื™ื‘
ืœื‘ืฉืจ ืืช ืขืฆื‘ื™ื”ื ื•ืืช ื”ืขืืƒ
ื™ ื•ื™ืฉื™ืžื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื• ื‘ื™ืช ืืœื”ื™ื”ื;
ื•ืืช ื’ืœื’ืœืชื• ืชืงืขื• ื‘ื™ืช ื“ื’ื•ืŸืƒ
ื™ื ื•ื™ืฉืžืขื• ื›ืœ ื™ื‘ื™ืฉ ื’ืœืขื“
ืืช ื›ืœ ืืฉืจ ืขืฉื• ืคืœืฉืชื™ื ืœืฉืื•ืœืƒ
ื™ื‘ ื•ื™ืงื•ืžื• ื›ืœ ืื™ืฉ ื—ื™ืœ
ื•ื™ืฉืื• ืืช ื’ื•ืคืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื•ืืช ื’ื•ืคืช ื‘ื ื™ื•
ื•ื™ื‘ื™ืื•ื ื™ื‘ื™ืฉื”;

ื•ื™ืงื‘ืจื• ืืช ืขืฆืžื•ืชื™ื”ื ืชื—ืช ื”ืืœื” ื‘ื™ื‘ืฉ
ื•ื™ืฆื•ืžื• ืฉื‘ืขืช ื™ืžื™ืืƒ
ื™ื’ ื•ื™ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ
ื‘ืžืขืœื• ืืฉืจ ืžืขืœ ื‘ื”ืณ ืขืœ ื“ื‘ืจ ื”ืณ ืืฉืจ ืœื ืฉืžืจ;
ื•ื’ื ืœืฉืื•ืœ ื‘ืื•ื‘ ืœื“ืจื•ืฉืƒ
ื™ื“ ื•ืœื ื“ืจืฉ ื‘ื”ืณ ื•ื™ืžื™ืชื”ื•;
ื•ื™ืกื‘ ืืช ื”ืžืœื•ื›ื” ืœื“ื•ื™ื“ ื‘ืŸ ื™ืฉื™ืƒ

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ื ืคืจืง ื™

So letโ€™s look at the differences betweens the texts and see if we can find significance here, even if itโ€™s not omni-. None of the classical commentators explicitly deal with this issue, but Rabbi Eisemann tries to go into each variant detail and explain them with reference to his thesis about the underlying purposes of each sefer. I will mark changes for which I have no explanation beyond โ€œretain[ing] some of the original spontaneityโ€ as โ€œI have nothingโ€.

ื ืœื—ืžื•/ื ืœื—ืžื™ื

This makes sense, since in ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ this is in the middle of the story (the battle with the Philistines started back in chapter 28) so โ€œwere fightingโ€ fits. In ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื this is the start of the story, so it uses the simple past.

ื•ื™ื ืก ืื™ืฉ ื™ืฉืจืืœ/ื•ื™ื ืกื• ืื ืฉื™ ื™ืฉืจืืœ

Rabbi Eisemann proposes that ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื isnโ€™t really interested in the battle as a whole; it just wants to focus on the death of Saul. So ื‘ื ื™ ื™ืฉืจืืœ are mentioned in the collective, ืื™ืฉ ื™ืฉืจืืœ.

ื‘ื”ืจ ื’ืœื‘ืข/ื‘ื”ืจ ื”ื’ืœื‘ืข

I canโ€™t see any reason for this change, except perhaps a change in how the mountain was called over the next 500 years.

ื™ื”ื•ื ืชืŸ/ื™ื•ื ืชืŸ

Similar to ื“ื•ื“/ื“ื•ื™ื“, this is clearly a nomenclature change over time.

ืขืœ/ืืœ

I have nothing.

ื”ืžื•ืจื™ื ื‘ืงืฉืชื”ืžื•ืจื™ื ืื ืฉื™ื ื‘ืงืฉืช and ืžืŸ ื”ื™ื•ืจื™ืืžื”ืžื•ืจื™ื

I have nothing.

ื•ื™ื—ืœ/ื•ื™ื—ืœ ืžืื“

This is subtle, but it may be part of ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื's maximizing Saulโ€™s culpability, to increase the contrast with David.

ืืœ ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื•/ืœื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื•

I have nothing.

ืคืŸ ื™ื‘ืื• ื”ืขืจืœื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื•ื”ืชืขืœืœื• ื‘ื™/ืคืŸ ื™ื‘ื•ืื• ื”ืขืจืœื™ื ื”ืืœื” ื•ื“ืงืจื ื™ ื•ื”ืชืขืœืœื• ื‘ื™

Perhaps removing the ื“ืงืจื ื™ reduces our sympathy for Saul.

ืขืœ ื”ื—ืจื‘ ื•ื™ืžืช/ืขืœ ื—ืจื‘ื• ื•ื™ืžืช ืขืžื•

I have nothing.

ื•ื›ืœ ื‘ื™ืชื• ื™ื—ื“ื• ืžืชื•/ื•ื ืฉื ื›ืœื™ื• ื’ื ื›ืœ ืื ืฉื™ื• ื‘ื™ื•ื ื”ื”ื•ื ื™ื—ื“ื•

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื is only interested in Saul, not all of Israel.

ื‘ืขืžืง/ื‘ืขื‘ืจ ื”ืขืžืง ื•ืืฉืจ ื‘ืขื‘ืจ ื”ื™ืจื“ืŸ

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื keeps the story localized to Saul.

(I am skipping the small variants)

ื•ื™ืคืฉื™ื˜ื”ื• ื•ื™ืฉืื• ืืช ืจืืฉื• ื•ืืช ื›ืœื™ื•/ื•ื™ื›ืจืชื• ืืช ืจืืฉื• ื•ื™ืคืฉื˜ื• ืืช ื›ืœื™ื•

ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื seems much more interested in the fate of Saulโ€™s decapitated head. I think it may be to contrast Saulโ€™s fate with David, who not only kept his head but put his enemyโ€™s on display:

ื•ื™ืงื— ื“ื•ื“ ืืช ืจืืฉ ื”ืคืœืฉืชื™ ื•ื™ื‘ืื”ื• ื™ืจื•ืฉืœื; ื•ืืช ื›ืœื™ื• ืฉื ื‘ืื”ืœื•

ืฉืžื•ืืœ ื ื™ื–:ื ื“
This story does not appear in ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื, so perhaps the detail of Saulโ€™s head was present in some earlier history but was left our by the author of ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ to avoid the contrast.

ื•ืืช ื’ืœื’ืœืชื• ืชืงืขื• ื‘ื™ืช ื“ื’ื•ืŸ/ืืช ื’ื•ื™ืชื• ืชืงืขื• ื‘ื—ื•ืžืช ื‘ื™ืช ืฉืŸ

Again, ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื is more interested in Saulโ€™s head.

ื•ื™ืœื›ื• ื›ืœ ื”ืœื™ืœื”/ื•ื™ืžืช ืฉืื•ืœ ื‘ืžืขืœื• ืืฉืจ ืžืขืœ ื‘ื”ืณ

ืกืคืจ ืฉืžื•ืืœ spends much more time on the actions of ื™ืฉื‘ื™ ื™ื‘ื™ืฉ ื’ืœืขื“, which is consistent with our reading of ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื focusing on Saul and his failure.

The story in ื“ื‘ืจื™ ื”ื™ืžื™ื ends with ื•ื™ืกื‘ ืืช ื”ืžืœื•ื›ื” ืœื“ื•ื™ื“ ื‘ืŸ ื™ืฉื™. This is more than saying โ€œDavid became kingโ€; ื•ื™ืกื‘ has the sense of turning, of a revolution (literally!). Davidโ€™s kingdom would be something utterly unlike Saulโ€™s. Ezra will constantly emphasize that Davidโ€™s dynasty will never fall, and that the return to Zion marks the rebirth of Israelโ€™s glorious past.